Development From Teacher Feedback

As a result from my teacher's feedback on my documentary ideas, i feel that the family documentary would be the best idea to go ahead with, however i will not rule out the travel documentary completely;as my teacher suggested it would be good to have the travel doc as a back-up,therefore i will still film some footage in New Zealand.

Seeing as i am intending on featuring the family doc on channel 4, i think that it would be more suitable if i made this documentary quite 'humorous', as i feel that this would be best suited to the target audience. Therefore i have been researching some 'humorous' family documentaries you tube.

I like the idea of the beginning of this video.It introduces the family and then has a wide shot still image of the whole family. i think that this is a good introduction to the documentary as it introduces straight away that this is a documentary about family.